Use these sentences and you will definately get written discourse minimum 80. And since the vocabulary and grammer of these sentences are great, you will score high for these secitons which will help you in overall score for writing.
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1. Opinion
An 'opinion' question
asks for your view, not the views of other people, and you don't have to give
both sides of the argument. Just make your opinion clear in the introduction,
then explain it in the rest of the essay.
2. Discussion + opinion
(For and Against or Advantages and Disadvantages)
A 'discussion'
question requires you to write about both sides of the argument, and you should
write a similar amount for each view. If the question also asks for your
opinion, you don't need an extra paragraph. Just make it clear in the
introduction and conclusion which of the two views you agree with
3. Problem + solution
Type 3 is easy. Simply write a paragraph explaining the problem(s) and a
paragraph explaining the solution(s). Some questions ask about 'causes' or
'effects': these would be part of the 'problem' paragraph.
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1)
Opinion
Essay :
Introduction
1)
XXXX has become a popular leisure activity in many countries in the developed
world but it has hidden risks. This essay will suggest that it is indeed
dangerous and that it is likely to make consumers more self-centered/selfish
and less disciplined with their money.
2)
All over the world today/In many Western countries today, it can be observed
that the issue of XXX has grown in importance over the past few decades/years.
3) All over the world today/ In many Western
countries today, it can be observed that the issue of XXX has fallen in
importance over the past few decades/years.
4)
AIDS/Income equality/ XXX is one of the most serious issues/ dangerous problems
facing lesser developed nations today/ many developed countries today/ many
poverty-stricken nations today/ many underprivileged nations today/ many
industrialized countries today.
5)
It is undeniable that XXX is one of the most challenging issues in the Western
world today.
6)
Newspapers XXX, in one form or another, have been in existence for centuries,
their purpose being to spread news.
7)
The growing level of XXX has proven to be one of the major obstacles for
humanity in the 21st century.
8)
Global obesity XXX rates have been swelling over the past few decades now. This
is a trend that is having a devastating effect on populations everywhere.
9)
Over recent years, level of XXX unemployment has been increasing at an alarming
rate.
10)
XXX is certainly something which is often discussed in today’s world. Hardly a
day goes by without the subject of XXX being raised in most people’s lives.
1)
Some people maintain that it has a beneficial influence on our lives.
2) This essay will express full agreement with
this view and will offer reasons for this position.
3)
This essay will express complete disagreement with this view and will justify
this viewpoint.
First
Paragraph
1)
To begin with, a variety of
reasons can be offered to explain why I am /not in favour of XXX.
2)
Foremost among these is that,
although it seems reasonable to suggest that XXXX, it should not be forgotten
that / It is foreseeable that
3) My
view, however, is that this would lead to serious damage to the environment and
alternative options need to be found.
4) XXX
is one of the key reasons why …..
5)
Linked to this is the fact that ……
6)
What is more, another point to be taken into consideration is that
7)
An instance illustrating this in action is the fact that ….
8)
Were something to grow, then the level of XXX would move in tandem (present)
/ would have moved in tandem (past).
9)
Had more been done to xxx then the result would be
10)
Should such thing be permitted, it is argued that XXX would
Second
Paragraph
1) In addition, it is worth pointing out
that it is widely held that
2) The
fact that XXX can be considered as a classic example of this occurring.
3) What
is more, another point in favour of/ a further common criticism of XXX
4) A
relevant example I would like to draw on here would be…
5) Bans
on commonly used drugs like alcohol in the past have shown they do nothing to
curtail users, but just drive people underground, increasing criminal activity
and creating more strain on police agencies.
6) As the above-mentioned points make it
clear, it can hardly be denied that/ it can be
clearly seen that
Conclusion
1) Taking
these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, without a shadow of a doubt (there is not a
shadow of a doubt that ), I conclude that/ I am inclined to believe that
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2.Problem
and Solutions
Introduction
1) XXXX has become a popular leisure activity
in many countries in the developed world but it has hidden risks. This essay
will suggest that it is indeed dangerous and that it is likely to make
consumers more self-centered and less disciplined with their money.
2) All over the world today/In many Western
countries today, it can be observed that the issue of XXX has grown in
importance over the past few decades/years.
3) All
over the world today/ In many Western countries today, it can be observed that
the issue of XXX has fallen in importance over the past few decades/years.
4) AIDS/Income equality/ XXX is one of the
most serious issues/ dangerous problems facing lesser developed nations today/
many developed countries today/ many poverty-stricken nations today/ many
underprivileged nations today/ many industrialized countries today.
5) It is undeniable that XXX is one of the
most challenging issues in the Western world today.
6) Newspapers XXX, in one form or another,
have been in existence for centuries, their purpose being to spread news.
7) The growing level of XXX has proven to be
one of the major obstacles for humanity in the 21st century.
8) Global obesity XXX rates have been
swelling over the past few decades now. This is a trend that is having a
devastating effect on populations everywhere.
9) Over recent years, the level of XXX
unemployment has been increasing at an alarming rate.
10) XXX is certainly something which is often
discussed in today’s world. Hardly a day goes by without the subject of XXX
being raised in most people’s lives.
……..//…………
1) What
are the underlying causes of this devastating global/phenomenon/
trend/behaviour and where might solutions to this pressing/thorny issue lie?
2) In
this essay I am going to examine the causes of this problem and outline what I
believe are some possible solutions to tackle this/ eradicate this
In this essay, I am going to explore its
relative advantages and disadvantages and present my opinion as to which holds
more weight.
Causes
1) To
begin with, I will now consider what I hold to be the causes of this
phenomenon.
2) Foremost
among these is the fact that XXX
3) Linked
to this is the fact that
4) Yet
another cause which I feel is important to point out is…
5) An
instance illustrating this in action is that / It is illustrated by the fact
that
6) Conditionals
7) As
the above-mentioned points make it clear, it can hardly be denied that
Solutions
1)
Moving on to consider the
possible solutions, a number of courses of action could be taken by governments
and individuals. It is generally maintained that education is one of the key solutions to this issue.
If the young ones understand the importance of public places and know the
consequences of damaging them, the result might deter them from committing such
mistakes. What is more/ In addition, having stringent rules and regulations to
punish the perpetrators appropriately would certainly ameliorate the situation.
Public awareness through media could also be helpful to let people know about
these punishments and consequences.
2) If
people were to… then they would…
3) Can
it be said that if we were to ban smoking that this would not in some part help
to solve this issue? Some might hold this to be somewhat draconian.
4) Or
would this be too harsh? Many would consider this too harsh a remedy to this
problem.
5) A
relevant example I would like to draw on here would be…
….//…
1) In
addition, it is commonly believed that
2) Since
the infrastructure of a country is highly dependent on the government
themselves, it is therefore clear that allocating a large budget to developing
infrastructure has plenty of advantages.
3) When
it comes to spending money on protection from disasters, prevention is better
than cure
4) It
is undeniable that spending money on detecting disasters early has many
benefits.
5) It
is undeniable that governments should put measures in place to protect
citizens’ safety
6) It
is undeniable that were the government to spend more on health, there would be
less disease
7) It
is undeniable that were we to spend more on education we would have a better
workforce contributing to a higher GDP.
8) Had
the government spent more on developing infrastructure the country would be
better equipped to do business
9) Had
measures been put in place to protect people then such disasters would not have
such great effects
10) Another step to be taken would be to
11) ......... would certainly ameliorate
(make situations better) the situation.
12) It is vitally important that .........
13) Legislation
should be introduced to control .........../ It is also believed that having
stringent rules and regulations to punish the perpetrators appropriately would
certainly ameliorate the situation.
14)
…//….
1)
That fact that XXXX can be considered as a classic example of this occurring
2) A
recent study/survey by the ……..shows that 50% of …..
3)
Therefore/ it can be clearly seen/observed that…. The argument that XXX can be
debunked (shows not true). …. It seems incontrovertible (obviously true) that
Conclusion
1) In
conclusion, It is undeniable ( there is no denying that fact that )that this is
a phenomenon whose causes present us with a huge difficulty. It is my
considered opinion that if we were to put in place some of the solutions
mentioned, we would at least be on the way to solving this problem. Not only
governments but individuals must also play their part to contribute to the
solution of this phenomenon.
2) We
must all try harder to bring about the enactment (putting into action) of these
solutions if we are to solve this problem
6) In
conclusion, it is my considered opinion that were we to put in place some of
the solutions mentioned we would at least be on the way to solving this
problem. Different countries are trying many different approaches and they
should all be considered individually and judged by their effectiveness and
humaneness
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3. Discussion
+ opinion (For and Against Essay)
Introduction
1)
A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue of whether ….or
2)
It is highly debatable to assess whether XXX or xxxx should be responsible
3)
Whether XXX or XXX should be held responsible for XXX….
4)
XXX is an issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate, with
supporters maintaining that it is vital in order to protect society, while
opponents claim that it is an unjustifiable restrictions of public access to
information.
5)
XXX is an issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate, with
supporters maintaining that it has a fundamentally beneficial influence on our
lives, while opponents claim that it has several detrimental effects as well
6)
However, it is highly debatable whether it is more important than any other
considerations, such as health and personal happiness, which some people
consider to be of greater significance
7)
The argument that technology will completely replace the teachers in the
classroom is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many.
8)
Both sides of this contentious issue will be put under scrutiny in the essay
below, and my opinion as to which holds more weight will be given.
First
paragraph
1)
Turning, to being with, to the
arguments put forward by critics/advocates or those who advocate the xxx and they
believe that the negative aspects/benefits of XXX are manifold.
2)
Foremost among these is that
it is commonly held that /
3)
Linked to this is the fact
that
4)
Another point which I feel
is important to point out is that
5)
Also of some significance is
6)
An instance illustrating
this in action is that
7)
Conditions
8)
As the above-mentioned
points make clear, it can hardly be denied that ….
Second Paragraph
1)
Moving on to consider the opposing arguments put forward by critics/advocates/
on the other side of the fence, they claim that
2)
Were a ban in place, would it really prevent people from smoking XXX?
3)
The fact that XXX can be considered as a classic example of this occurring.
5)
Conditions (Were XXX to V1 or Had we/people/more…not/V3, then …..
6)
A relevant example I would like to draw on here would be…
7)
A further common criticism of
8)
What is more, another point in favour of / against is …..
10)
A recent study/survey by the ……..shows that 50% of …..
11)
Therefore/ it can be clearly seen/observed that…. The
argument that XXX can be debunked (shows not true). …. It seems
incontrovertible (obviously true) that
Conclusion
1) In conclusion, weighing all the arguments
up against each other, there are strong and valid points on both sides of the
fence and a balance should be sought. We
should steer a middle course between these opposing sides, providing smokers
with smoking areas in public places which could be easily avoided by
non-smokers.
2) However, It is my
considered opinion that ..we/people should steer a middle course between these
opposing sides
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4.
Advantages and Disadvantages
Introduction
1) A matter of considerable controversy at present is the
issue of whether ….or
2) It is highly debatable to assess whether XXX or xxxx
should be responsible
3) Whether XXX or XXX should be ….
4) XXX is an issue which frequently generates a great
deal of heated debate, with supporters maintaining that it is vital in order to
protect society, while opponents claim that it is an unjustifiable restrictions
of public access to information.
5) However, it is highly debatable whether it is more
important than any other considerations, such as health and personal happiness,
which some people consider to be of greater significance
6) The argument that technology will completely replace
the teachers in the classroom is a subject that is both supported and refuted
by many.
7) Both sides of this contentious issue will be put under
scrutiny in the essay below, and my opinion as to which holds more weight will
be given.
8) This essay will explore the relative advantages and
disadvantages of XXX
Advantages
1)
Turning, to being with, to
the arguments put forward by critics/advocates/those who advocates and they
ascertain that the benefits/negative aspects of XXX are manifold. To begin
with, a variety of advantages can be put forward for XXX
2)
Foremost among these is the
establishment of
3)
Linked to this is the fact
that
4)
A further benefit involves
the building of
5)
An instance illustrating
this in action is that / It is illustrated by the fact that
6)
Conditions (Were XXX to V1
or Had we/people/more…not/V3, then …..
7)
As the above-mentioned
points make it clear, it can hardly be denied that/ the heightened benefits of
this opinion regarding the role of XXX can clearly be seen
Disadvantages
1) Moving
on to consider the arguments put forward by critics/advocates/those who
advocate the xxx, they argue that, despite the advantages/ positive effects of/
mentioned above, it should also not be forgotten that it has hidden risks/
there are numerous advantages of XXX/ the hidden risks of XXX should not be
forgotten.
2)
The first reason/negative
impact I wish to consider is that , is the fact that
3)
Were a ban in place, would
it really prevent people from smoking XXX?
4)
The fact that XXX can be
considered as a classic example of this occurring.
5)
Should such thing be
permitted, would it really prevent from xxx?
6)
Conditions
7)
A relevant example I would
like to draw on here would be…
8)
Moreover, some critics/
scientists/ experts are in favour of / oppose the view of/
9)
A further common criticism
of
10) What
is more, another point in favour of / against is …..
11) What is more, another negative aspect of …. Is
that
12) A recent study/survey by the ……..shows that
50% of …..
13) Therefore/ it can be clearly seen/observed
that…. The argument that XXX can be debunked (shows not true). …. It seems
incontrovertible (obviously true) that
Conclusion
1) In conclusion,
weighing all the arguments up against each other, there are strong and valid points
on both sides of the fence and a balance should be sought. We should steer a middle course between these
opposing sides by providing smokers with smoking areas in public places which
could be easily avoided by non-smokers.
2) However, It is my
considered opinion that ..we/people should steer a middle course between these
opposing sides/ that the advantages
considerably outweigh the disadvantages
General
1) Is
likely to ….XXX is likely to cause problems such as XXX
2) Most
teenagers are considerably less XXX than they did in the past
3) Women
XXX are far more intelligent XXX than menXXX
4) Ever-growing,
never-ending, ever busier …. Working lives are becoming ever busier
5) There
seem to be ever growing rise in the price of food
6) Will
definitely be, could easily be, may turn out to be
7) It
seems to be the case that, it is well known that
8) As
for the educational aspect
9) From
an economic standpoint/ From employers’ standpoint,
10) From
a political point of view
11) As
far as health is concerned
12) From
a historical standpoint
13) Regarding
the moral implications of
14) It
is fairly easy to comprehend that
15) It
is my firm belief that
16) In
contrast, it must be admitted that
17) It
is likely/ foreseeable that
18) People/governments
should focus their attention to overcome the problem of / to eradicate XXX
19) To reduce the impact of
20) By
Ving, governments/we can ensure that
21) It
is, therefore, predicted that
22) The
effects of these XXX tend to manifest themselves on health issues
23) It
is unfortunate that
24) Regardless
of the fact that
25) One
most compelling evidence/reason is that
26) Consequently/
As a result
27) Nevertheless/
However/ Therefore/ Moreover
28) As
history has shown
29) In
most aspects of people’s lives
30) It
is undeniable that globalization has resulted in both positive and negative
effects which must be addressed accordingly
31) XXX
has contributed to the world’s economies in many beneficial way
32) It
is widely maintained that it is advantageous that
33) Social
aspect
34) Risk
and danger of epidemic diseases
35) Epidemic
(widely prevalent) widespread
36) Responsible
and respectful children who in turn mature into respectful adults
37) Eventually, they have to resort to
38) Long-term
solution/ short-term
39) These
problems result from the fact that
40) In
some industrialized countries, it is not unsual/uncommon to
41) Nowadays,
it is becoming more and more common to
42) Allocating
a large budget to computers/xxx
43) The
human race, the mankind,
counterparts,
infringe
on,
deterrent,
deter,
splurge
out on,
good/bad
influence on,
negative
impacts/aspects,
vitally
important role,
it’s
important to realize that ,
standpoint
44) The
Third World Countries,
begin to embrace western culture,
public transport,
school work,
need watchful eye,
XXX
should be made known to public so that ,
stringent rules and regulations,
youngsters,
adolescents, the young ones, pupils, students, children,
detrimental
effects,
harmful,
leading
to obesity or other implications to their physical development,
develop
better social skills by interacting with their peers.
As far as physical development is concerned,
become
more confident in communicating with others, wasting time on computer games,
beneficial
to our personal well-being.
45) The
growing level of aging populations would mean that governments would have to
spend more on their welfare systems which in turn would require average
citizens to pay more tax.
46) We should steer a middle course by leaving
this decision to each individual as it should only be their decision to do so.
47) However,
it is highly debatable whether it is more important than any other factor such
as how it can contribute to the society.
48) My
considered opinion is that choosing a job is a personal decision and should be
left to individuals.
49) May
strengthen the ties between nations. As a result, these nations would be able
to benefit from better relationships developed among each other.
50) Governments
should consider holding such events only if they can afford to do so without
compromising the welfare of their citizens.
51) It
is worth pointing out that
52) It
is often argued that
53) It
seems reasonable to suggest that
54) It
is particularly significant that
55) It
could be argued that
56) It
is likely that
57) There
is a strong likelihood that
58) There
are those who maintain that
59) One
could say that/ One must remember that
60) One
could draw the conclusion that
61) In
contrast but “on the contrary”
62) Somoking/too little exercise is a
contributory factor in in many diseases such as cancer and heart disease.
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